FIREWORKS SHOULD BE BAND!

This week we have been writing a persuasion. It is when you are trying to change someones mind. I have been writing about fireworks should be banned or not. I really enjoyed it because I wan't fireworks banned. 

Here is an example of banning fireworks.

FIREWORKS SHOULD BE BAND! 

I think that fireworks should be banned forever because it’s a waste of money.

The first reason is they are dangerous because it can burn houses and disturb neighbours, also it can go the wrong way, hit someone immediately and give an bad wound, also it can burn trees and then there will be no oxygen to breathe.

The second reason is little baby brother’s and sisters might be scared, also there ears might pop and they won’t be able to hear a single word. It also might be to loud because they are still little. They might cry, run get lost in the dark. Also the mum and dad will be distracted in the fireworks while their baby is cutting something or something else. The smoke might be to strong for their lungs, also it might not work anymore.

The third reason is about animals, they might be truly threatened, might think owner is being cruel and trying to hurt them. They will get hurt because of the sparkles like their getting sunburnt, they might also need to go to the vet to get checked.